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Word of the Day by ~astera:iconastera:





these are the blinds
the blinded ones
blonde
what a bit of littleness they are
their length alone alluring
their rubbed rare raws
enduring down
©2006-2009 ~astera
:iconastera:

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From the same batch as the previous, the only one I liked enough to set it free.

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:iconextramundane:
short and sweet?

I think I'd need one more image for completion...

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-ash
:iconmusical-nymph:
nice job with your sounds.

"what a bit of littleness they are" is awfully wordy.

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You were right about the stars: each one is a setting sun.
:iconnepasavaler:
hurrah for alliteration and assonance.
I do agree with the second comment about that line, though.

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~lost-souls *poetic-forms ~france =francophones

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